Thursday, April 8, 2010
uncomfortable the bourbon is 100 proof
Each post, if you can believe it, if carefully edited before it's posted. Hazing of intentions is often a problem initially: floating ideas can be a struggle to harden alone; add into hte situation the idea that most people are going to be writing with you (others reading you), there is always that need to make sure the topic you're addressing is interesting enough. Communication is also a huge worry; can someone be sure that they're writing effectively?
Has the nature of these posts changed as class and time have continued? That question is slightly impossible to answer, to anyone's satisfaction anyway. Every post is different, of course. The topics always differ, the writing is still mine. I don't really thing the idea of growth can exist in this situation. The idea motivating this blog is independent enough for me to rely on my own instincts when it comes to what I actually decide to blog on. Class has warmed me enough to Shakespeare's work, allowing me to know a point of interest (out loud, right away) when I see one. As far as the subject actually chosen, I just go by the bones. My only option really. There has to be a lack of something (whether a certain point in the plot just doesn't feel right within the context it's written in, or whether something is just overdone) that makes the mind stop and focus on whatever isn't workin, telling. These choices I make are based on whatever jumps out, things which seem to offer a good about to write about (things that seem to have a life of their own). Besides those which were just mentioned, there is no real connection I'm trying to make between these blogs. If the topics I'm picking ae similar in nature, I'm blind to it (and would have to apologize for the string of boring posts.
These posts usually begin with a broad topic, eventually whittling itself down to a solid post by the end of the post (that's the goal anyway). The rhythm, don't know what else to call it, of my posts come out of the bit of editing that is done. Not much focus on the first run through. This stream of conscious narration is then dried out a little, picking up the key points throughout the original, and every solid bit that supports those points.
These assignments are easy enough. Creating our own jumping off point, and jumping off. The anchor which gives these posts their structure is the tests. Goes without saying, although it is going to be said, that even with something as loose as my brokenly arranged Shakespeare posts need something solid to work off of. This explains my current struggle with THIS assignment.
Henry V as king
In 1 Henry IV he made the bold claim in the first act that he would redeem himself in the eyes of the populace, and be the more admired for his apparent reformation of character. Later on he said much the same thing to his father, promising to defeat Hotspur in combat and so exchange Henry Percy's honors for his (Hal's) shame. He seems to have done all this and more.
In the first act of Henry V the nobles cannot expound enough upon how well-rounded he is, and how completely he understands so many aspects of the kingdom. Their mention of his concern for the commoners was what really caught my interest, though; obviously he would have knowledge of the lower classes, having spent so much time among them. The fact that this seems to be worthy of comment only serves to point out how effective Hal's transformation into King Henry V really was. Were he still viewed as the wayward son he used to be, the fact that he understands what goes on in taverns and the like would be seen as a matter of course. The fact that it is so impressive to the nobles proves how completely Prince Harry's plan worked. He is viewed now as exactly what a king should be, and all the more impressive because of how quickly he turned his life around.
Looking Back
In general, I think I value that the blogs give me a chance to go off on my own topic or ideas. They do not necessarily need to be focused around a question posed by the professor. I also value the commenting part because we are given the chance to think about other ideas and hear what people think of mine. Perhaps they have something to say relating to my blog topics that I never thought of.
From my second blog post, Claudio's first line still stick out for me: "Ay, but to die, and go we know not where"(3.1.118). This originally stuck out to be because I remember having a professor tell a class that no one really survives death. We can't just walk up to someone and casually ask them how death was. Looking back, I feel as though what Claudio said is still relevant. We still don't know what happens. There is still that great uncertainty I feel that this can also be related to my third post when I wrote about Richard saying "let us sit upon the ground, And tell sad stories of the death of kings- / How some have been deposed, some slain in war, / Some haunted by the ghosts they have deposed, / Some poisoned by the wives, some sleeping killed, all murdered"(3.2.151-156). Richard seemed uncertain, not necessarily about death, but seemed to be doubting if he could be a successful king. He's assuming that he'll be killed, but there's an uncertainty of how.
Overall, as I write this, I like how this specific assignment has allowed me to go back and see the subtle connections between each of my blog posts.
reflection of blogs
Although I have a common theme running through all three posts, I see a lot of difference in my writing of posts. In my first post I do not feel I was as direct with my responses. I was kind of all over the place with my answer. As the second and third post came about, I was more focused in choosing a topic and sticking to that topic throughout my whole posts. I feel as though I have definitely approved in my writing of blog posts throughout the semester so far.
I really enjoy the blog assignment. Not only do I get to express my opinions regarding the Shakespeare plays, but I get read my fellow classmates posts as well. This gives me a greater understanding of the stories because I get to see other people’s analysis of the plays. Also, I can see other student’s confusion as well so I know I am not alone with being confused at times. I also really enjoy being able to comment on other student’s posts because then those people can hear my opinion and analysis. And I enjoy reading what people have to say about my blogs through their comments. Getting feedback is extremely helpful to understand these plays. Even when I am blogging and not responding, I still read through some of the posts so I get a sense of what the class is thinking.
Looking back I definitely see improvement and I also realized that when I write these blogs I get a further understanding of the plays because I have to write down the things I am thinking so I have something to refer back to.
Wednesday, April 7, 2010
Finishing Henry V
In Act IV, scene IV, Henry proved his sensitivity when he is being told about the death of his cousins and the way in which they tried to stay together. I thought that this was a sign of maturity, considering that in King Henry IV he hardly seemed to care at all that he had family.
In this same scene we see that Henry has changed, but maybe not entirely. Playing his prank on Williams; giving the glove to Fluellen and then staying to watch the hilarity ensue, shows that Henry has moved on from being silly little Hal playing with Falstaff in the saloons, but he still has his keen sense of humor, and even in bad times, he likes to keep things light. Then, after telling Williams that it was actually him he had a problem with, he gives him money! He appreciates William’s honesty and rewards him for that, which I have to say really pleasantly surprised me. Lastly, I was impressed by Henry’s humble return home.
I find it unfortunate that poor Catherine had to be used as a pawn in order for him to expand his empire, when he was clearly disinterested in her in the beginning of the play. I find myself consistently disappointed in the positions that women end up in in Shakespearian plays. There are some women who use men as well, or don’t allow themselves to be involved with men in order to protect themselves, but Catherine seems like a nice lady who doesn’t deserve to be used. The end was also a little sad because of the knowledge that Henry’s son is unable to maintain the French throne and his hard work went to nothing.
All together, I enjoyed reading this play. I think it was a good mix of fun and seriousness, and it gave the audience a chance to watch Henry prove himself to be a good king.
Blog Babble
In my first post on Monday, February 1, 2010, my blog reflected on Shakespeare’s The Merchant of Venice. This post focused on Portia’s role in the play and what kind of character she was. I questioned whether or not she was a strong or weak female figure. During my argument, I commented on what seems to be a powerless Portia. Portia’s future husband was to be chosen with the help of her father’s will. With that said, Portia was powerless in her future.
My second post on March 8, 2010, commented on Richard II’s view of a King’s power. My blog specifically questioned whether Richard or Henry would be a better ruler. It asked that questions of who would use their power most effectively in order to make the best king. The post asked the readers to think about which character is the best candidate for king? Who would be the best ruler? Who would successfully use their power for good, instead of for his own motives?
The third post before the half way marked was posted on February 20, 2010, and took a look at power in Measure for Measure. This post specifically focused on the character of Isabella and how the only way in which she had power throughout the play was through her own sexuality. In fact, she was given complete power, but would she give up her own purity and innocence in order to save her brother’s life? This decision was undoubtedly in her hands, and her hands alone. I raised the point that it is significant that her only chance to use her power was when she was asked to use her sexuality.
As one can see, all three of my posts focused on issues of power. Even though each entry commented on power, each was completely different scenario where power played an important role. I suppose that subconsciously, during my readings, I mdrawn to aspects of power and how power plays out in Shakespeare’s works.
Meta-blog
As Scabbed Wings noted, Shakespeare's characters are indeed the driving force behind his dramas, and I believe that's why the latter two of my posts focus on specific characters. (My Merchant post was more about antisemitism than either Shylock or Graziano.) I love picking apart key characters and delving into their psychologies, idiosyncrasies, and import. I like how I linked both Richard II and Henry IV to Richard III because it helped draw the whole tetralogy together. And even if you can compare one villain to another or one clown to another, no two Shakespearean characters are the same!
I especially liked predicting endings and seeing if I'm right. In my first post, I predicted that Shylock would either become better or worse for his conversion to Christianity, and I was surprised that he didn't appear in Act V at all. I actually felt a little cheated, as if Shakespeare had just dodged the issue. In my Richard II post, I predicted that readers would soon have reason to pity King Richard, as pathetic as he seems in the first couple of acts, and I was right! I figured that if we could feel in the least bit sorry for Richard III that ol' Shakespeare would find a way to make Richard II sympathetic as well, which just goes to show how important it is to have sympathetic protagonists, no matter how lowly they are. I also predicted that Gaunt would haunt the rest of the play, and, sadly, he doesn't. I guess it would have been to predictable.
My favorite post, by far was on Prince Hal being a "player." (Hee hee. I love puns.) I predicted that he would eventually sell out Falstaff--but who didn't see that one coming? Hal doesn't seem to be much of a central character until the second half of the play. At first, he comes across as moody, apathetic, and juvenile, but then he baffles the audience along with English court when he all of a sudden makes all these valiant oaths. I wasn't sure if he would actually follow through on that whole "seeming the sun" thing. I enjoy watching seemingly minor characters evolve and step into the foreground.
Before this class, I'd never blogged before. I must say: I do enjoy it. I like the informality and that anyone can access the blog. It's exciting to read the comments people leave and to know that I've prompted a reaction in someone.
midterm blog
Out of the three blog posts I have done so far this semester, my focus generally ends up being on the main characters, more specifically the main ruling characters within the plays. Looking back on my first post, “Women Rule,” I really like how I was able to present my idea and support it and even though it was the first one, I still think it was one of my best. Even the title shows my focus being on the power of women at the time and goes on to discuss the power Portia has over the play both as a woman and disguised as a man. My second blog post titled, “Audience’s Reaction,” began to take me away from the more structured, essay like post found in the previous one and more toward a conversational, questioning one. Here, I started by discussing where each play took place and Shakespeare’s hand in editing the actual events. At first he played it safe by keeping the plays off of the country of England, but then all his history plays, many of them controversial, became centered on England, and their royalty. Lately, I’ve been finding that I am very curious as to how the audience would have reacted, or the current royalty would have reacted to the portrayal of one of Shakespeare’s plays. Unfortunately, that is something we can never really know, but to have that insight and other people’s opinions of what happened is also interesting to me. Hence, the reason why in this post I noticed myself beginning to ask more questions hoping to spark a discussion with other people in the class. My last blog, “Prince Harry,” was even less formal than before, and I’m not sure how I feel about that. In that one I kind of feel like I was jabbering on, blurting out ideas just hoping they fit together. At the time, I didn’t know if Harry would become Henry V, a man I had always thought to be this great guy, but even at the start of reading Henry V, I am still waiting to see it happen. Although, I have to say he is really good at covering his back such as in the case of issuing those death warrants. He still has time to redeem himself in my eyes…
Many times, especially in the more recent two blog posts, I asked questions a lot trying to see what others would respond to and what their thoughts were. Unfortunately, that doesn’t always work. I know Professor Mulready responded to two of them, but only one student responded to one other of my posts. Maybe I need to work on my approach, maybe they aren’t interested in what I’m saying, or maybe I just get lost in the quay, it’s not a big deal, just a note to consider.
As Therese mentioned in her blog, I also believe the blogs to be a great way to discuss topics and ideas that we did not get a chance to discuss in class. Sometimes ideas are sparked in class or there is something that either interests or bothers us and by writing informally about it we begin to see where our thoughts are going or gain insight from other classmates. It also gives those who are quieter in class a chance to show off what they know and think. It gives our thoughts some place to go instead of staying dormant in our minds.
Blog about Blogging
I like this informal aspect of the blog. After re-reading my posts I realized my first two posts were very formal and much like a paper, while my 3rd post is a little less formal. In my 3rd post I make references to modern 21st century culture. I make a reference to Lil Wayne, and the television show 24; both references would not make a formal paper. In my future posts I plan on incorporating modern culture references as well as textual evidence. As a future teacher, I think junior high and high school students need references to modern culture to help them with interpretation of the texts, especially with Shakespeare. Most high school students hate Shakespeare with passion, but by pointing out how much Shakespeare's work relates to today I hope to lessen students hatred for him. If I continue to make references to modern culture in these blogs, it could be a good place to look back to for ideas to incorporate when I'm teaching Shakespeare to my students.
The content of my blogs tend to be all over the place, but with a few commonalities. My blogs tend to focus on specific characters and their characterization. A common theme that reoccurs in different ways is the theme of public perception. In my blogs I discuss the characters Antonio, the Duke (Measure for Measure) and the Henrys. After reading my blogs I found all these characters have one thing in common they all are most concerned about public perception. All these characters' actions are for the most part to make themselves look good and to be positively remembered forever.
My favorite post is my third post mainly because I made a prediction that comes 100% true in the next play. In the post I discuss Prince Hal and his friends. I stated "He (Prince Hal) probably will have to drop the friends he hangs with now to be king." In Henry V, Hal has nothing to do with Falstaff anymore, in which Falstaff never appears in the play and dies offstage from a broken heart caused by King Henry V. My correct prediction shows the more you read Shakespeare, it becomes easier to follow and know what his plays is going to set up for the ending. I feel as a class we can now better answer the question from the first day of class "Why Shakespeare?"
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
Blogging
In my blogs I mostly focus on Shakespeare’s depiction of women, how he creates his characters’ identities, and how he represents power relations. When writing the posts I don’t remember feeling that they were particularly political, but reading them all in succession makes me realize that my writing comes from a particular standpoint: it’s mostly influenced by a feminist focus on women, but it is also concerned with the character’s positions within the societies they inhabit. This is a little surprising to me because I usually focus on more methodological aspects of writing and not so much on broader themes; it also makes me realize how much my education has influenced my stance on a variety of subjects. I don’t think 3 blogs is enough for me to recognize a change in my writing, though. Perhaps by the end of the semester I’ll focus more on other aspects of Shakespeare’s writing.
There are two things I think are worth revisiting: the first is the examination of cycles and progress in the second tetralogy. By the end of Henry IV I began to see a recurrence of a central powerful character being surrounded by a group of people who try to influence his actions. In Richard II the king was surrounded by older advisors who didn’t really want to give up the power they had accumulated while Richard had been young; In Henry IV Hal surrounds himself with thieves and liars and members of the lower classes; in Henry V we find that Hal now surrounds himself with religious men. In each case the group determines the identity of the individual: when Hal surrounded himself with rogues, he was seen as a rogue. When he surrounds himself with gentlemen and seeks counsel from an archbishop, he’s a great religious leader. A contrasting example of progress would be how Hal casts Falstaff out in order to assume his role as a serious King. I also notice that each instance of progress is actually an act of manipulation and violence, which makes me question whether the “progress” is really worth it. The second is that I see a parallel between themes in Shakespeare’s comedies and these history plays. In both the characters in power try to make it seem as if they don’t have as much power as they actually do by siphoning responsibilities off to others: the Duke makes Isabella decide not to kill Angelo, and Henry V makes the Archbishop decide to go to war. Also, both Measure for Measure and Richard II illustrate a historical shift in methods of social control: both plays move from punishing through spectacle (Angelo wanting to execute Isabella’s brother; Bolingbroke killing Richard’s associates) to disciplining through surveillance (the Duke disguising himself as a friar in order to effectively manipulate and “direct” Angelo & maybe even his marriage proposal; York insisting on telling the technically illegitimate king that his son is a traitor, which is a kind of internalization of the surveillance.) Hal exemplifies this idea: he goes from using spectacle to legitimate his king-ness (killing Hotspur) to using surveillance (making sure people know that he’s cut himself off from Falstaff.) … Random, but I think I may like the comedies more than the histories.
Reflection....
About my Blogging
I believe my blogging has become more focused over the first half of the semester. For the first blogging assignment I was unsure about what was ok to write about, so I found myself writing about multiple ideas and thoughts I was having about The Merchant of Venice. I focused on Antonio, Shylock, and even briefly on Portia’s father. My ideas were all over the place when they should have been more focused on one main idea. I was using the blog to sort out my ideas rather then presenting a main idea I believed to be the most important.
I believe that by the second blog, I was more conscious of having to focus on one main idea that I had picked out in the reading. I focused on the question of approval of Angelo by the Duke, and brought up the actions of the Duke which to the reader made it seem like there was a lack of approval. I believe that in this blog I relied too much on quotes from the text. I realize now that textual evidence is important, but too much of it can just make the point you are trying to make more confusing.
My most recent blog, which really was quite a few weeks ago due to breaks, seems to be my strongest blog I’ve made so far. I believe this is in part because I really enjoyed reading Richard the Second even though it was a bit confusing. I focused on the idea of fairness, and how the characters in the play were not fair at all. I liked writing about this idea because I felt that it was a different way to look at the reading.
For me the blogs seem to be working the right way. I feel my blogs are getting stronger as I am getting more comfortable with writing and posting for the class to read. I think that the blog assignment is a great way to get everyone in the class participating, even the shy people like myself, and contributing their own ideas about the plays we are reading.
Monday, April 5, 2010
This is How I Blog
I've noticed a definite change of tone in my posts and comments over the semester. My first post was a little strained in its voice and a little too formal. I also focused on plot summary, as if the readers didn't know the story of the play. My first two comments, as well, are very formal. In my next post, I dropped the plot summary and instead mentioned certain parts of the play to show what they said about the characters. I also wrote slightly more casually, adding a joke or two. My third post was less formal but still proper enough for an English class, and I utilized a lot of tropes and humor. I also used an outside source for this post, a first in my Shakespeare blogging career. I think this shows that I've finally become used to this blogging business. My second and third set of comments were also very informal and humorous, which is how I believe the comments should be. Make a point, but don't be too formal about it.
I was actually extremely surprised at how stiff my first post and comments were. My ideas were definitely there but for me, a blog is a somewhat-informal, casual kind of composition. I'm not advocating for a post filled with text speak, mind you. Just one that is not so stiff and formal. To me, blogs are not scholarly essays, but places to make a solid point and discuss it.
I'm very biased when it comes to my topics because I feel that they're all valuable and worth revisiting. I don't mean to toot my own horn but I worked pretty hard on formulating my topics and I like all of them. I believe my favorite topic was the issue of Richard and Bolingbroke's likability. The argument of Bolingbroke's Machiavellian rise to power is quite fascinating and one I never would have thought of. The reader wants to hate Richard and love Bolingbroke so much, but just can't without at least a little apprehension. Throw in this little argument and Bolingbroke becomes worse of a bad guy than Richard.
What I really love about the blogging is the ability to focus on a topic I want to focus on and let out everything I have to say about it. This is also a great way to bring out some talking points. By reading other people's posts, one can discover aspects of and opinions on plays he never would have noticed before. I think the ability to coherently ramble about one little point is so much fun. I love assignments with few constraints. The blogging is a very fun assignment for me and is very helpful in developing ideas and talking points for class.
-Sarah Bras
Reflections on Blogging Throughout the Semester
Sunday, April 4, 2010
Shakespeare's Considerate Use of Caesuras (And Why King Henry is a Hypocrite)
Therefore in fierce tempest is he coming,
In thunder and in earthquake, like a Jove,
That if requiring fail, he will compel;
And bids you, in the bowels of the Lord,
Deliver up the crown, and to take mercy
On the poor souls for whom this hungry war
Opens his vasty jaws; and on your head
Turns he the widows' tears, the orphans' cries,
The dead men's blood, the pining maidens' groans,
For husbands, fathers, and betrothed lovers
That shall not be swallowed in this controversy. (Henry V 2.4.99-109)
That sentence is ten lines long, which is what sometimes happens when writing iambic pentameter. There are nine caesuras though, and that's where Shakespeare's consideration for his actors comes in. A caesura gives the actor a break in his speech, which is welcome when they have to read a speech that can be sometimes in excess of a hundred lines. Shakespeare has plenty of endstops and caesuras, which allow the actor a chance to breathe, or to pause for emphasis. That I think shows at least a little consideration and thought on Shakespeare's part.
Shakespeare's formal approach to verse is impeccable. I've noticed something else though, about an earlier point I made about blank verse. In this play King Henry V is acting much more like nobility than in the previous play, right down to the language. He has really come into his own. He's even right on top of who is trying to overthrow him. I think it's important to note, and this little irony was pointed out to me as I was reading the essay accompanying the play (though there's a footnote for it as well), that if you follow King Henry's logic, the Earl of Cambridge has a more legitimate claim to the throne than King Henry, since he married the daughter of Mortimer, who was the supposed rightful heir to Richard II, and King Henry is laying claim to the throne of France because his great-grandfather Edward III was the son of Queen Isabella, the daughter of King Philip IV of France, and the French king only holds his claim through his female ancestors, since his male ancestor had usurped the throne, similar to what King Henry V father had done. So basically King Henry V is saying that he is the rightful heir to the French throne even though he's not really the rightful heir to the English throne, the Earl of Cambridge could be. Really, these lineages are all confusing. I thought I'd just gotten a hold on the English line and now I feel like I need another set of tetralogies to explain the French line.
Thursday, April 1, 2010
Finishing Henry IV
I was excited in the beginning of this play because I wasn’t King Henry’s biggest fan and I was hoping that by the end of this play, his reign would be overthrown and we would have a new king to adjust to. By the end of the play, however, I liked King Henry slightly more; it was Prince Harry that was the problem.
Unlike most other people, I do not believe that Prince Harry actually wanted to change anything about himself. He wanted people to believe he would. This I find to be incredibly sad and manipulative, and makes me believe that Harry is a bad choice for the future king. Plenty of teenagers hang out with questionable crowds and make bad decisions, and I can certainly find fault with that. My problem is in his plan to “fix” himself. I think the change from boy to man should happen organically, not be meticulously planned in order to “look” better. If he wanted to look better he should have just acted better, gotten rid of his loser friends and behaved himself. He did not do either of these things. Given the chance, Prince Harry is so stuck in his childish ways that he puts his degenerate friends in positions of power! And later he proves that he is not beyond pranks of any kind when he steals Falstaff’s wallet and allows him to blame the bar hostess and generally make a fool of himself.
I don’t think that Prince Harry will make a very good ruler and because of this, the ending of this play made me uneasy. I suppose that after reading King Richard II and III I was expecting that history plays ended with the overthrowing of the government that was in power in the beginning of the play, so by the end of this play, I was almost thrown for a loop. I didn’t know what to do at the end because neither party was particularly desirable as the monarchy. I know that Prince Harry did what he said he would do, kill Hotspur, but I still think he’s all for show.
One other problem I had at the end of this play is that there is no real reconciliation. At the end of the comedies, there is always a marriage. At the end of the tragedies, everyone is dead. At the end of the previous two histories I have read, the governments from the beginning have been overthrown and the end is actually a beginning for the new rulers. This, however, left the monarchy (and me) unresolved. I don’t like the feeling that nothing really NEW happened. Although Hotspur is dead the king still has a number of living adversaries who could potentially attack his crown. Did the action of this whole play really do anything to strengthen or weaken the power of the royal family? I really don’t know.