While reading the first act of Richard the III , the
most prominent aspect is how Shakespeare uses language. The word choice affects the imagery, alters
the meaning and can make the ugliest sentiments an auditory delight.
In Richard’s speech in the opening
act he refers to his deformity, “Unless to spy my shadow in the sun” (1.1.26).
The use of the words “spy” and “shadow” resonates the darkness of his deformity
but the last word, “sun” seems hopeful. Although he goes on to say in the next
line, “And Decant on my own deformity” (1.1.27) which renders the sun at fault because
it shows him his deformed shadow and provides him with opportunity to be
miserable about his condition.
The exchange between Lady Anne and
Richard is significant. Her words toward
him are harsh and her emotions are raw yet by the end, she has seemingly
softens towards him. She repeatedly refers to him as a “devil” and he refutes
her allegation that he not a beast because he does not pity anyone. Richard blames his brother for her losses,
than admits guilt to win her favor and blames her beauty as his motive. While
the vibrant insults Lady Anne hurls at Richard are notable more importantly is
that way Richard flips her accusations of him into some sort of compliment
towards her. She wants revenge on him because he killed her husband but he
tells her that he killed her husband to get her a better one, himself
(1.2137-139)! She refers to him as a
“black magician” (1.2.34), in this conversation he seems to be a magician
because he gets her from wanting him dead, to accepting a ring and agreeing to
meet up with him at his estate. As not
having read the rest of the play, I am hoping she is in fact using him, not
being used by him.
Queen Margaret’s anger drives her
sharply delivered wit. Although, Richard flips her curse onto herself
by getting her to say her own name afterwards.
It is another example of how Richard manipulates language/conversation
to suit himself. Queen Margaret unleashes her rage on Queen Elizabeth, “Die,
neither mother, wife, nor England’s queen.---“ (1.3.206). The
words of this line should way heavy on Queen Elizabeth because it represents a potentially
huge void but she doesn’t speak until after Margaret leaves. She responds by saying
she has never done her any wrong. I
wonder if this is representative of what kind of character Queen Elizabeth is
as the play progresses. In the following passage Queen Margaret warns Queen
Elizabeth:
Poor painted
Queen, vain flourish of my fortune,
Why shrew’st
thou sugar on that bottled spider
Whose deadly
web ensnareth thee about?
The
alliterative of “poor painted” followed by “queen” is moving. The association
of queens with being poor and painted is not atypical. The other dissimilarity between sugar and a
spider is also effective tool of imagery.
Act 1 is constructed in such a way
that I look forward to discovering more beautiful lines of imagery as the play
progresses. I also want to know if Lady Anne truly falls for the evil wizard,
Richard. I am interested to learn if
Queen Elizabeth it clueless, and the outcome of Queen Margaret’s prophesies.
3 comments:
I don't believe Lady Anne falls in love with him that quickly, I don't buy it. My impression was that she basically took the ring just to make him shut up? I'm interested as well to see how it plays out...
Also, I think it's really interesting when you mention the words "spy" and "shadow" resembling darkness, yet "sun" does seem hopeful, great connection!
I loved your post, Pam! The language in this opening act is remarkable and truly stunning. I love how you pointed out that Shakespeare “can make the ugliest sentiments an auditory delight.” How true! Even with so much harshness and many evil words spoken in act i, the play still captivates. This is not unlike the deformed, villainous Richard who enchants and casts his “deadly web,” ensnaring the readership and characters of the play. The “black magician” line was great as there does seem to be a mystical power that Richard has with language and cunning. Another “wizardly” moment you mentioned was the reversing of the Queen Margaret’s curse. Not only was this part somewhat darkly comedic to me, but it once again reveals Richard’s devious and crafty way with words.
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